Today's homework
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
<Completion : to finish doing something>
At monday, I watched that korean actor Yuh-Jung Youn was been winner of Academy awards. Somebody says that she completes a completion of her life, but she will continue on her way.
<Thoroughly : in a delailed and careful way>
To take a rest comfortably in holiday, I must work thoroughly in work time.
1. I had to fill out resume to change my job. Now I succeeded in moving my job.
2. When I got my first job, I didn't know that what can I do for my office. My partner helped me very hard. I still feel thankful for him.
At monday, I watched that korean actor Yuh-Jung Youn was been winner of Academy awards. Somebody says that she completes a completion of her life, but she will continue on her way.
<Thoroughly : in a delailed and careful way>
To take a rest comfortably in holiday, I must work thoroughly in work time.
1. I had to fill out resume to change my job. Now I succeeded in moving my job.
2. When I got my first job, I didn't know that what can I do for my office. My partner helped me very hard. I still feel thankful for him.
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