the first birthday party in Korea
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I'd like to talk about the first birthday party in Korea. The death rate was very high, so if babies went well and healthy through 1 year, we believe they become good labors. Fom that idea, people celebrate the first birthday. In addition, we have a special ceremony called a dol-job-i. Parents prepare some objects to symbolize the future; thread is meaning for longevity, micerophone is for celebrity and cash is for richness and so on. Next, parents place them in front of a baby and waiting what is picked up. And we memorize that ceremonies and give wishes to their prosperous future.
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