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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 06. 23 조회 12797

How manage to control promotion anxiety?

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Hi Simon,

I hope that everything is going well with you and your family.

Today, I'd like to talk about'Control Promotion Anxiety'.
I think that promotion can feel both rewarding and stressful. After you've accepted all the congratulations, it's time to deal with all of the new expectations. I have theree tips to address the anxiety that most people feel when stepping into a new role:

- Prepare support. Identify a strong ally, mentor or coach who can you lean on during the first few months on the job. Ask this person to give you honest and constructive feedback along the way.
- Create a plan. Lay out what you plan to accomplish in your first few months. Be realistic and set clear priorities so that you are prepared to make necessary trade-offs.
- Know your limits. A new job means new responsibilities but be honest with yourself about what's in your control and what's not.

Thanks in advance for your comment.

Sincerely
Jay
튜터 교정 답변

Hi Simon, I hope that everything is going well with you and your family. Today, I'd like to talk about'Control Promotion Anxiety'. I think that promotion can feel both rewarding and stressful. After you've accepted all the congratulations, it's time to deal with all of the new expectations. I have theree tips to address the anxiety that most people feel when stepping into a new role: - Prepare support. Identify a strong ally, mentor or coach who can you lean on during the first few months on the job. Ask this person to give you honest and constructive feedback along the way. - Create a plan. Lay out what you plan to accomplish in your first few months. Be realistic and set clear priorities so that you are prepared to make necessary trade-offs. - Know your limits. A new job means new responsibilities but be honest with yourself about what's in your control and what's not. Thanks in advance for your comment. Sincerely Jay

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Corrections

After you've accepted all the congratulations

—►After you've accepted all the compliments and greetings 

 it's time to deal with all of the new expectations.

—► it's time to deal all of the expectations.

I have theree tips to address the anxiety that most people feel when stepping into a new role

—► I have three tips to address the anxiety that most people feel when stepping into a new role

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Hi Jay!

"With great power comes great responsibility"  a catchphrase popularized by Spider-Man comics and movies. Whatever life holds in store for you, never forget these words.

Teacher Simon

 

 

 

 

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