Business Trip
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi! Carrie,
I'm writing to inform you on my business trip confirmed. I'm supposed tp visit at Baek-ryeong and Daechung islands from Monday to Thursday during 3 nights and 4 days. It takes 4 and half hours to get in Baek-ryeong by a speed cruise from a land harbor. I'm not sure if the phone call conncting and qaulity is good and available. Fortunately Tuesday's class could be possible but Thursday mighy be delayed. In the class, I hope to share you the story of my trip, work and island's cousin.
I'm writing to inform you on my business trip confirmed. I'm supposed tp visit at Baek-ryeong and Daechung islands from Monday to Thursday during 3 nights and 4 days. It takes 4 and half hours to get in Baek-ryeong by a speed cruise from a land harbor. I'm not sure if the phone call conncting and qaulity is good and available. Fortunately Tuesday's class could be possible but Thursday mighy be delayed. In the class, I hope to share you the story of my trip, work and island's cousin.
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