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2021-05-26 (1)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
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Title: Budget request for estimated repair costs for staff housing in May 2021
This is a budget request for the estimated moving cost for staff housing in May 2021. Please refer to the following details.
- Details -
• Vendor: Lucky Repair
• Budget Amount : 1 KRW (VAT Included)
Attachment: Quote. END.

Please choose the date and time for the inventory check

Recently, after hearing my ex-wife's advice, I changed my daily routine.
Recently, after hearing my ex-wife's advice, I changed my routine.
Recently, after hearing my ex-wife's advice, I changed my daily pattern.
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Title: Budget request for estimated repair costs for staff housing in May 2021
This is a budget request for the estimated moving cost for staff housing in May 2021. Please refer to the following details.
- Details -
• Vendor: Lucky Repair
• Budget Amount : 1 KRW (VAT Included)
Attachment: Quote. END.

Please choose the date and time for the inventory check **

Recently, after hearing my ex-wife's advice, I changed my daily routine.
Recently, after hearing my ex-wife's advice, I changed my routine.
Recently, after hearing my ex-wife's advice, I changed my daily pattern.

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