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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 06. 03 조회 9746

2021-06-03

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
He thinks that the army should be voluntary, not mandatory.

Every man and woman must have a six-week military training.

In a police physical exam, a candidate must do at lease 50 pushups.
In a police physical exam, a candidate must do at lease a certain number of pushups.

Most female candidates for the police cannot do even one pushup.
Most female candidates for the police cannot do pushup even once.
튜터 교정 답변

He thinks that the army should be voluntary, not mandatory.

Every man and woman must have a six-week military training.

In a police physical exam, a candidate must do at lease 50 pushups.
In a police physical exam, a candidate must do at lease a certain number of pushups.

Most female candidates for the police cannot do even one pushup.
Most female candidates for the police cannot do pushup even once. **

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