Self Introduction ~
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My name is Cho jung sang and I'm forty one(41) years old.
I am working at Information & Communication Technology related company and I am in Management Division.
My job is to manage the payments and the compliance.
I have carried out 'payment'jobs for almost 10 years,
but Compliance is a new role.
As, this is a new role, i am very much excited
I enjoyed play TV game with my son and i'm interested in coin collection.
i have been to three countries, among them chian, the coin did not see.
Now that i think about it, i so was wondering why there are no coin.
I usually go to work at ten past eight.
My job is to manage the payment.
I have done this for a long time, 10 years.
After 10 years of long services, I needed some change in my job role to refresh myself.
Now, I am in charge of Compliance.
As this is a new role, I am very much excited.
I am working at Information & Communication Technology related company and I am in Management Division.
My job is to manage the payments and the compliance.
I have carried out 'payment'jobs for almost 10 years,
but Compliance is a new role.
As, this is a new role, i am very much excited
I enjoyed play TV game with my son and i'm interested in coin collection.
i have been to three countries, among them chian, the coin did not see.
Now that i think about it, i so was wondering why there are no coin.
I usually go to work at ten past eight.
My job is to manage the payment.
I have done this for a long time, 10 years.
After 10 years of long services, I needed some change in my job role to refresh myself.
Now, I am in charge of Compliance.
As this is a new role, I am very much excited.
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