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2021-06-11 (1)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
In order to enter one's flat, one first needs to input a password at the door of the building, then input a password at the door of the flat.

Email title: Passwords for Building and Flat EntranceS/Entrance
In order to facilitate the moveS/the move of you and the new resident, please let us know the passwords for the building and your flat entranceS/entrance.
튜터 교정 답변

In order to enter one's flat, one first needs to input a password at the door of the building, then input a password at the door of the flat.

Email title: Passwords for Building and Flat EntranceS/Entrance
In order to facilitate the moveS/the move of you and the new resident, please let us know the passwords for the building and your flat entranceS/entrance. **

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