2021-06-22
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
When I worked for the casino, my shift/my shift time was from 5 PM to 2 AM. Most coworkers went home at 6 PM. Therefore, I worked alone most of the time. So, I was happy with my shift/my shift time.
When I went to work, my coworkers were finishing THEIR WORK to go home.
I like the sound of leaves and branches of trees when it winds.
I like the sound of trees' leaves and branches when it winds.
When I went to work, my coworkers were finishing THEIR WORK to go home.
I like the sound of leaves and branches of trees when it winds.
I like the sound of trees' leaves and branches when it winds.
튜터 교정 답변
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