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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 07. 08 조회 10240

Buddhist monk and Meat

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
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I couldn't tell the following because 20 minutes was too short.
- A Buddhist is not a monk. A Buddhist is a normal person who believes in Buddhism. Buddhists eat meat.
- A Buddhist monk is not allowed to eat meat, but when a monk becomes ill or old, he may eat meat to get proper nutrition.
- Buddhist temples serve meat to young monks.
- I think Buddhism is a type of philosophy, not religion.
- I saw many parents who were not qualified. I think the decision whether a child should eat meat or not must be made by experts, not by parents.
튜터 교정 답변

I couldn't tell the following because 20 minutes was too short.
- A Buddhist is not a monk. A Buddhist is a normal person who believes in Buddhism. Buddhists eat meat.
- A Buddhist monk is not allowed to eat meat, but when a monk becomes ill or old, he may eat meat to get proper nutrition.
- Buddhist temples serve meat to young monks.
- I think Buddhism is a type of philosophy, not religion.
- I saw many parents who were not qualified. I think the decision whether a child should eat meat or not must be made by experts, not by parents.

Thanks for your thoughts, Dong-hoon.  We'll talk tomorrow.     Lucky

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