Paula Sam( = Teacher )~~ Go easy on yourself. Don't work so hard.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
We have three bed rooms in total. The first one is a master bedroom.
It is for me and my wife. There is nothing but a big bed.
The second and third rooms are for my kids.
These rooms are filled with plenty of toys and books.
I usually have lunch with my colleagues in a cafeteria.
After lunch, we talk about business over coffee.
Sometimes, I take a nap during the lunch time. if i'm too tired.
Ten years ago, our division entered new staff.
I became a mentor of her.
But, now is became my wife.
Maybe, i became fond of her while working together with her.
I usually go to work by bike.
It takes about thirty minutes but if it rains I take a bus and
it takes good fifty minutes.
I work for a company called 삼성SDS.
It is a big company and has been so for about thirty years ago.
We mainly provide information and communication technology services
It is for me and my wife. There is nothing but a big bed.
The second and third rooms are for my kids.
These rooms are filled with plenty of toys and books.
I usually have lunch with my colleagues in a cafeteria.
After lunch, we talk about business over coffee.
Sometimes, I take a nap during the lunch time. if i'm too tired.
Ten years ago, our division entered new staff.
I became a mentor of her.
But, now is became my wife.
Maybe, i became fond of her while working together with her.
I usually go to work by bike.
It takes about thirty minutes but if it rains I take a bus and
it takes good fifty minutes.
I work for a company called 삼성SDS.
It is a big company and has been so for about thirty years ago.
We mainly provide information and communication technology services
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