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2021-07-22 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Couple 1: A couple, where just one person is contractually eligible for accommodation by NLCS Jeju, or single member of staff with at least one child: 1 or 2 bedroom, 12M

Couple 2 and Familiy 1: 2 bedroom (3 bed room depending on availability), 15M
Couple 2: A couple, where both are contractually eligible for accommodation by NLCS Jeju
Family 1: A couple, where just one person is contractually eligible for accommodation with at least one child

Family 2: A couple, where both are contractually eligible for accommodation by NLCS Jeju with at least one child: 3 bedroom, 19M
튜터 교정 답변

Couple 1: A couple, where just one person is contractually eligible for accommodation by NLCS Jeju, or single member of staff with at least one child: 1 or 2 bedroom, 12M

Couple 2 and Familiy 1: 2 bedroom (3 bed room depending on availability), 15M
Couple 2: A couple, where both are contractually eligible for accommodation by NLCS Jeju
Family 1: A couple, where just one person is contractually eligible for accommodation with at least one child

Family 2: A couple, where both are contractually eligible for accommodation by NLCS Jeju with at least one child: 3 bedroom, 19M **

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