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M weekend plan

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I'm going to go to the art gallery. Leeum with my wife this weekend.
Leeum is located in Itawon.
It takes 30 minutes by subway from my house to there.

Temporary exhibition "Art Spectrum 2014" is on display until the end of this month.
The exhibition shows the work of ten Korean contemporary & traditional artists.

After watching the exhibition,
we're suppsed to eat out near Itawoon.
I'm eagerly looking forward to exhibition on coming saturday.
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I'm going to the art gallery at Leeum with my wife this weekend. (Be careful at where you put the (.) period in your sentence)

Leeum is located in Itawon.

It takes 30 minutes by subway from my house to get there.

The temporary exhibition of "Art Spectrum 2014" will be on display until the end of this month.

The exhibit shows the work of ten Korean contemporary and traditional artists.

After watching the exhibit, we will eat out just nearby Itawon.

I'm very much looking forward to the exhibition this coming Saturday.

 

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