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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 08. 20 조회 9238

My Happy Weekend

작성자: bomilee 담당 튜터: Trixie
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I do a lot of fun things on the weekend.
On saturdays, i usually get up early.
After i prepare go to swimming lesson, i have breakfast and study.
Then i go to swimming by bus.
I learn swimming poze and play in the pool.
After lunch, i do all off my homework.
On sundays, i clean my house with my mom, and i read some books.
It takes almost all day.
In the evening, i often go out for dinner with my mom and dad.
Then i do exersise in my house.
I love my happy weekend!
튜터 교정 답변

I do a lot of fun things on weekend.
Every saturday, i usually get up early.
After i prepare go to swimming lesson, i have breakfast and study.
Then i go to swimming by bus.
I learn different swimming styles and play in the pool.
After lunch, i do all off my homework.
On sundays, i clean my house with my mom, and i read some books.
It takes almost all day.
In the evening, i often go out for dinner with my mom and dad.
Then i do exersise in my house.
I love my happy weekend!

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