Thank's got it Friday...
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
When I was a kid, we could clearly see the changes of four
different seasons; Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter.
Unfortunately, I can no longer recognize the differences of
these season changes.
The Spring and Autumns are disappeared, but only Summer and
Winter remains.
What it means that summer gets more hotter, and winter got more
colder, where we now see people face death due to these rapid
weather changes.
You know, my parents have a lot in common.
Although they don't always agree on things, they have great
respect for each other.
My dad is short and chubby, but my mother is tall and thin
different seasons; Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter.
Unfortunately, I can no longer recognize the differences of
these season changes.
The Spring and Autumns are disappeared, but only Summer and
Winter remains.
What it means that summer gets more hotter, and winter got more
colder, where we now see people face death due to these rapid
weather changes.
You know, my parents have a lot in common.
Although they don't always agree on things, they have great
respect for each other.
My dad is short and chubby, but my mother is tall and thin
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!