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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 08. 27 조회 10260

Thank you, staicy.

작성자: bomilee 담당 튜터: Trixie
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Dear Junny,
Do you remember Staicy?
Staicy was our 3th grade English teacher.
Stacy was short and fat.
She had black long curly hair.
I always thought English was boring.
But Staicy was excited and never scolder.
Because of her, my English scores improved.
She made English fun!
Now, we are in the 6th grade.
English is funny and easier than other subjects.
I really want to thank Staicy for teaching us.
Your friend,
Bo.mi.
튜터 교정 답변

Dear Junny,
Do you remember Staicy?
Staicy was our 3th grade English teacher.
Stacy was short and fat.
She had black long curly hair.
I  thought English was boring.
But Staicy was exciting and never get angry.
Because of her, my English scores improved.
She made English fun!
Now, we are in the 6th grade.
English is funnier and easier than other subjects.
I really want to thank Staicy for teaching us.
Your friend,
Bo.mi.

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