Neighborhood (Role Play)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Where did you move to? I have moved a few times since I was born. I moved to Seoul when I was 3years old. At that time, I was just a baby. So I didn’t remember how I felt when I came to Seoul. Although I was not born in Seoul, I almost grew up in Seoul. I could learn Korean mother tongue not Korean slang. Even I moved several times only in Seoul. I didn’t move out other cities. That’s why I made many friends just in Seoul. What kind of facilities are near your new house? I moved to the house I live now 3 years ago. I liked my new neighborhood because there were some facilities like neighborhood clinic, many supermarkets and theaters. Thanks for theaters near my house, my family can usually enjoy watching movies. I think that it is more convenient living city than the suburbs because I have everything I need near my house. Which one do you like between old town and new town? I think there are some pros and cons. Anyway, I hope you love your new house and you make good memories there.
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