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Rules at the movie theater.

작성자: bomilee 담당 튜터: Trixie
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Movie theater have some important rules.
When you go to movie theater, you should remember them.
First, you should not talk during the movie.
Before you go into the movie theater, turn off your cell phone.
And act quietly.
Second, don't throw food on the floor.
Don't lost any trash.
You should not bring pets too.
Third, should not kick the chair in front of you.
You should not make any noisy.
You can make the movie theater a great place.
Just follow these rules.
튜터 교정 답변

In the Movie theater they have some important rules.
When you go to movie theater, you should remember them.
First, you should not talk during the movie.
Before you go into the movie theater, turn off your cell phone.
And be quiet 
Second, don't throw food on the floor.
Don't leave any trash.
You should not bring pets too.
Third, should not kick the chair in front of you.
You should not make any noisy.
You can make the movie theater a great place.
Just follow these rules.

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