2021-09-01 (1)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Please refer to the following. I will give you the background. It will be interesting!
1. An email from me to a teacher
I received a call from the head of the Cannons Village maintenance office. She said that it is not allowed to place things in the public area as shown below. Furthermore, if a typhoon or strong wind blows, your stuff will probably damage your flat which is property of the school or other flats. So, please remove things into your flat.
2. The teacher's reply to my email
Thank you for meeting me to discuss the issue and for your understanding.
1. An email from me to a teacher
I received a call from the head of the Cannons Village maintenance office. She said that it is not allowed to place things in the public area as shown below. Furthermore, if a typhoon or strong wind blows, your stuff will probably damage your flat which is property of the school or other flats. So, please remove things into your flat.
2. The teacher's reply to my email
Thank you for meeting me to discuss the issue and for your understanding.
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