2021-09-01 (2)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I enclose the photos of the many other properties in Canons that have personal belongings in outside spaces, as you requested.
Of course, during a typhoon we would move all items to safety, but otherwise, we feel it’s unfair to ask only us to move belongings. Our children use the space outside the apartment and the small area near our apartment gives our family a little pleasure and has made it feel like more of a home.
3. My email to all staff members
Dear colleagues,
We hope you are doing well. We have something to notify you about.
Of course, during a typhoon we would move all items to safety, but otherwise, we feel it’s unfair to ask only us to move belongings. Our children use the space outside the apartment and the small area near our apartment gives our family a little pleasure and has made it feel like more of a home.
3. My email to all staff members
Dear colleagues,
We hope you are doing well. We have something to notify you about.
튜터 교정 답변
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