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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 09. 01 조회 10131

2021-09-01 (3)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Please remember that it is not allowed to put things in the public area as shown below. Other than it being a general rule, if a typhoon or the strong wind blows, your stuff will probably damage your flat or others' that are property of the school or landlords.
If the school's property or landlords' property is damaged by unattended things outside, you will have to take the responsibility for that, REGARDLESS WHETHER YOU LIVE IN A COMPLEX OR NOT.
Also, please comply with what the complex maintenance people ask you. Please remember you live in a complex where many people live together.
튜터 교정 답변

Please remember that it is not allowed to put things in the public area as shown below. Other than it being a general rule, if a typhoon or the strong wind blows, your stuff will probably damage your flat or others' that are property of the school or landlords.
If the school's property or landlords' property is damaged by unattended things outside, you will have to take the responsibility for that, REGARDLESS WHETHER YOU LIVE IN A COMPLEX OR NOT.
Also, please comply with what the complex maintenance people ask you. Please remember you live in a complex where many people live together.**

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