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Try some Bulgogi

작성자: bomilee 담당 튜터: Catherine
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Do you like meat and vegetable?
You should try buigogi.
Bulgogi is a famous food in korea.
Bulgogi made with meat, vegetable.
It looks delicious but teasts very good.
You can buy it at a restaurant or a food truck.
Many people eat bullgogi with rice.
People usually eat bulgogi as a meal.
People love to have it for lunch or dinner.
If you visit korea,you should order bulgogi !
튜터 교정 답변

Do you like meat and vegetable?
You should try buigogi.
Bulgogi is a famous food in korea.
Bulgogi made with meat, vegetable.
It looks delicious but teasts very good.
You can buy it at a restaurant or a food truck.
Many people eat bullgogi with rice.
People usually eat bulgogi as a meal.
People love to have it for lunch or dinner.
If you visit korea,you should order bulgogi !

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CORRECTION:

Do you like meat and vegetables?
You should try Bulgogi.
Bulgogi is a famous food in korea.
Bulgogi is made with meat and vegetables.
It looks delicious and tastes very good.
You can buy it at a restaurant or from a food truck.
Many people eat Bulgogi with rice.
People usually eat Bulgogi as a meal.
People love to have it for lunch or dinner.
If you visit korea, you should try Bulgogi!

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