Watching Sports

[CORRECTION]

I enjoy watching soccer. Soccer has been my favorite sports since I was an elementary student.

The team I support is FC barcelona.

--> The team I support is FC Barcelona.

Because my favorite player Lionel Messi plays as a WingFoward or Striker for that team.

--> Because my favorite player Lionel Messi plays as a Wing Forward or Striker for that team.

I like him because he is so passionate and so fast drive the ball.

--> I like him because he is so passionate and he kicks the ball so fast.

He is very short but He is very fast before anyone else.

--> He is very short but he is very fast than anyone else.

I recently watched worldcup match between Argentina verses Nigeria.

--> I recently watched the World Cup match between Argentina versus Nigeria.

The sports game won Argentina. So I`m very fun.

--> Argentina won this sports match. So I had very fun.

[COMMENT]

Hello, Aaron! It's good to know that you enjoy watching soccer game on TV. Well, I guess soccer is the most famous sport in Korea. You were able to tell a lot of detail about your favorite sport. Keep it up!

-Teacher Mitch-