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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 09. 07 조회 10949

2021-09-07

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
She sent me a message reading that she really appreciated what I have done.

The Background: Neal is visiting the Operations office to ask to change his access to doors.
Neal: With whom should I talk concerning my access to doors?
Dong-hoon: The relevant man is out of the office for a while. I don't know where he is now.
튜터 교정 답변

She sent me a message reading that she really appreciated what I have done.

The Background: Neal is visiting the Operations office to ask to change his access to doors.
Neal: With whom should I talk concerning my access to doors?
Dong-hoon: The relevant man is out of the office for a while. I don't know where he is now. **

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