Birch tree forest
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My town is small, but it has a huge forest.
I like to visit birch tree in the all season.
There are many things to do there.
You can claming the mountain.
You can also taking many beautiful birch tree picture.
It's pretty in any season.
If you get hungry, there are a lot of foods to eat.
Try some mak noddle at the restaurant.
Why don't you visit birch tree forest with your family.
You will have great time.
I like to visit birch tree in the all season.
There are many things to do there.
You can claming the mountain.
You can also taking many beautiful birch tree picture.
It's pretty in any season.
If you get hungry, there are a lot of foods to eat.
Try some mak noddle at the restaurant.
Why don't you visit birch tree forest with your family.
You will have great time.
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