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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 09. 21 조회 9326

2021-09-22

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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The store is close to here
The store is close here.

She claimed that the normal cost for replacing wallpaper in a flat which had a similar size to hers was 1.5M KRW.

I am guessing that he doesn’t want to have confrontation / a confrontation. He just wants to avoid conflict / a conflict, but that is not protecting the school. His own desire is not to have conflict / a conflict. I can understand that.
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The store is close to here
The store is close here.

She claimed that the normal cost for replacing wallpaper in a flat which had a similar size to hers was 1.5M KRW.

I am guessing that he doesn’t want to have confrontation / a confrontation. He just wants to avoid conflict / a conflict, but that is not protecting the school. His own desire is not to have conflict / a conflict. I can understand that. **

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