My name is Bo Mi Lee
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello, let me introduction myself.
My name is Lee Bo Mi.
I'm sixth grade at Wontong Elementary school.
I like to play video games and play the piano in my free time.
I also love reading books.
My favorite subject is English.
I want to be an English teacher.
I want to travelling all over the world someday.
Thank you for listening.
My name is Lee Bo Mi.
I'm sixth grade at Wontong Elementary school.
I like to play video games and play the piano in my free time.
I also love reading books.
My favorite subject is English.
I want to be an English teacher.
I want to travelling all over the world someday.
Thank you for listening.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!