My father
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My father is sick.
He was very healthy and passionate person.
I have been thought that he has always best condition.
He can't to walk himself.
So he is going to surgery of needs.
I hope he is healthier better than now.
He was very healthy and passionate person.
I have been thought that he has always best condition.
He can't to walk himself.
So he is going to surgery of needs.
I hope he is healthier better than now.
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