2021-10-04 (1)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
There is no direct flight to the place where I want to go.
There is no direct flight to where I want to go.
Let’s assume that I am filling out a table as shown below, in order to apply for overtime pay. Do you think ‘Leaving time’ would be a proper title for the time THAT/WHEN I left the office?
| Date | LEAVING TIME | Overtime hour | Reason |
It is a tenant’s responsibility to replace bulbs.
It is the responsibility of a tenant to replace bulbs.
I looked at the school’s bank statement to check transactions.
I looked at the bank statement of the school’s account to check transactions.
There is no direct flight to where I want to go.
Let’s assume that I am filling out a table as shown below, in order to apply for overtime pay. Do you think ‘Leaving time’ would be a proper title for the time THAT/WHEN I left the office?
| Date | LEAVING TIME | Overtime hour | Reason |
It is a tenant’s responsibility to replace bulbs.
It is the responsibility of a tenant to replace bulbs.
I looked at the school’s bank statement to check transactions.
I looked at the bank statement of the school’s account to check transactions.
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