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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 07. 02 조회 14191

Business trip

작성자: 1102047346 담당 튜터: Chloe1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I’m sorry to inform you that my flight has been delayed two hours so I think I’ll miss the first meeting. I know, you hate late time. So do I. But the weather is bad. That’s why flight is impossible. I just want you to know this situation is not my fault. It is inevitable. And I know how important this meeting is. So I prepared for it very hard. I’m afraid that my trial is removed because of this happening. I wonder if you can reschedule our meeting for two hours later. However, if you think that will be inconvenient for our clients, how about doing a video conference call? I can use the airport wifi to connect to Skype and have video chat while I’m in the airport waiting for my flight. Or, there is replacement. He is Jack. Jack helped me when I prepared for the meeting. I think that he also can participate in the meeting. Please let me know what is a better option. I want to get the chance that I show you how I prepared it.
튜터 교정 답변

Good morning Jake! Thank you for sharing your ideas. I hope that you will have a great day. Here are your corrections. ^_^

 

I’m sorry to inform you that my flight has been delayed for two hours so I think I’ll miss the first meeting. I know you hate late people and so do I. But the weather is bad. That’s why having a flight is impossible. I just want you to know that this situation is not my fault. It is inevitable. And I know how important this meeting is for our company. So I prepared for it very well. I’m afraid that my trial is removed because of this incident. I wonder if you can reschedule our meeting for two hours later. However, if you think that will be inconvenient for our clients, how about doing a video conference call then? I can use the airport wifi to connect to Skype and have a video call while I’m in the airport, waiting for my flight. Or, there is some who can replace me. He is Jack. Jack helped me when I prepared for the meeting. I think that he also can participate in the meeting. Please let me know what is do you think is the better option. I want to get the chance to show you how I prepared for it.

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