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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 10. 12 조회 10153

2021-10-12 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I heard that HR is going to revise the policy of staff housing. HR is going to add an article that reads, “If the Principle writes a letter that an unmarried couple is deemed as a married couple, then the school has to change their category and provide them with an annual rent allowance, accordingly.” After hearing this, I called a responsible person of JEINS and an auditor of JDC, and delivered what I heard.
튜터 교정 답변

I heard that HR is going to revise the policy of staff housing. HR is going to add an article that reads, “If the Principle writes a letter that an unmarried couple is deemed as a married couple, then the school has to change their category and provide them with an annual rent allowance, accordingly.” After hearing this, I called a responsible person of JEINS and an auditor of JDC, and delivered what I heard.**

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