Animal right and the Circus
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Three components of a circus are acrobats, trained animals, and clowns.
Animal right avtivists argue that the trained animals for a circus have exposed to stress and injuriy. But one of the animal tamers suggests that people can have the passion to wonder and explore the animals through the experiences such as watching a circus or visiting a zoo firsthand. The circus animal have been trained to perform through the carrot and stick, so those trainigs make them stressful and lead to the unnatural behaviors. Therefore I also agree with the anmal right activists' opinion.
Animal right avtivists argue that the trained animals for a circus have exposed to stress and injuriy. But one of the animal tamers suggests that people can have the passion to wonder and explore the animals through the experiences such as watching a circus or visiting a zoo firsthand. The circus animal have been trained to perform through the carrot and stick, so those trainigs make them stressful and lead to the unnatural behaviors. Therefore I also agree with the anmal right activists' opinion.
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