camping
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi, Robby
I like going camping to the mountains with a nearby beach
but my family don't go comping yet
Because we don't have comping equipment
Some camping ground are borrow equipment so we will try comping
Instead of camping, we go to condominium useally
Because company offer condominium to employee, we use it
It is cheap and convenient
I like going camping to the mountains with a nearby beach
but my family don't go comping yet
Because we don't have comping equipment
Some camping ground are borrow equipment so we will try comping
Instead of camping, we go to condominium useally
Because company offer condominium to employee, we use it
It is cheap and convenient
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