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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 10. 22 조회 9307

Diary 21 Oct

작성자: kolon_201601135 담당 튜터: mandela1usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Today's whether is good.
There are fresh air, sunshine, some wind, prefer temperature and cloud.

I got customer audit about new product.
The method of audit was online audit and our customer was canadian.

The audit started 9 am(korea time) and the time closed
11am. At that time, our customer said this audit shuld be finished today because too late.
I got to knowthere is 16hours time difference between Korea and Vancouver.
So, this audit was not completed, must get additional time later.
튜터 교정 답변

Today's weather is good.
There's fresh air, sunshine, some wind, good temperature and clouds.

I got a customer audit about a new product.
The method of the audit was online and our customer was canadian.

The audit started at 9 AM(Korea time) and the time closed at
11 AM. At that time, our customer said this audit should be finished later today.
I know there is a 16 hour time difference between Korea and Vancouver.
So, this audit was not completed, but must get additional time to finish.

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