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2021-10-22 (1)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The IT manager was transferred to another school last month.

I missed this part yesterday: If an investigator of IRS tampers with a backup file. The unique number of it changes. Using this way, we could prove that we didn’t tamper with taxpayers’ data. However, the IT Director already accessed the computers without taking any proper procedure.

I translated the Principal’s letter into Korean, and sent it to my lawyer. I also wrote about the current situation on a document, and sent it to my lawyer, too.

The JEINS executive who I met yesterday seemed to understand what I explained and why I am worried. He said...
튜터 교정 답변

The IT manager was transferred to another school last month.

I missed this part yesterday: If an investigator of IRS tampers with a backup file. The unique number of it changes. Using this way, we could prove that we didn’t tamper with taxpayers’ data. However, the IT Director already accessed the computers without taking any proper procedure.

I translated the Principal’s letter into Korean, and sent it to my lawyer. I also wrote about the current situation on a document, and sent it to my lawyer, too.

The JEINS executive who I met yesterday seemed to understand what I explained and why I am worried. He said...**

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