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2021-10-22 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
He said it is difficult for JEINS to do something about the schools’ investigation, but he said JEINS is the only one who actually can reprimand an employee. This means that the school will request JEINS to reprimand me based on what school finds through the investigation. So, I said to him, “In my experience here for three years, JEINS only agrees with what the school does.” He responded, “In a personnel matter, it is not so.” He said that he will keep monitoring this case. However, I don’t know whether he will be helpful.
튜터 교정 답변

He said it is difficult for JEINS to do something about the schools’ investigation, but he said JEINS is the only one who actually can reprimand an employee. This means that the school will request JEINS to reprimand me based on what school finds through the investigation. So, I said to him, “In my experience here for three years, JEINS only agrees with what the school does.” He responded, “In a personnel matter, it is not so.” He said that he will keep monitoring this case. However, I don’t know whether he will be helpful.**

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