My role model is sejong the great.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Sejong the great is my role model.
He was a king who made Korean alpabet.
Sejong was born in Korea in 1397.
He wanted people can use our langauge.
He made Korean alpadet with his people.
As a result, sejong made many Korean people use Korean alpabet Hangul.
He also started made Korean alpabet books.
I think sejong is the great person.
He made our life better and easier.
I hope that i can be like sejong in the future.
I want to use Hangul in many cantree.
He was a king who made Korean alpabet.
Sejong was born in Korea in 1397.
He wanted people can use our langauge.
He made Korean alpadet with his people.
As a result, sejong made many Korean people use Korean alpabet Hangul.
He also started made Korean alpabet books.
I think sejong is the great person.
He made our life better and easier.
I hope that i can be like sejong in the future.
I want to use Hangul in many cantree.
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