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2021-10-27 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
<eSAFETY POLICY>
· School technical staff regularly monitor and record the activity of users on the school technical systems and users are made aware of this in the appropriate Acceptable Use Agreement. Hardware may be monitored on an ad hoc and random basis.
튜터 교정 답변


· School technical staff regularly monitor and record the activity of users on the school technical systems and users are made aware of this in the appropriate Acceptable Use Agreement. Hardware may be monitored on an ad hoc and random basis. **

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