My problem is have many acne.
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Dear Mr. Advice.
I have to many acne in my face and body.
Please tell me how to solve this!
Acne girl.
Dear acne girl,
You must feel bad about have many acne.
Here are a few tips.
First, don't eat to many fast food.
Instead, eat fast food you eat vegetables and fruits.
Second,you wash your body and face clearly.
This can cause stress, so try to reduce your stress levels.
If you have acne gets worse, you had better exersice every day.
You can get advice from your mother.
Follow these tips, and you will be no have acne!
I have to many acne in my face and body.
Please tell me how to solve this!
Acne girl.
Dear acne girl,
You must feel bad about have many acne.
Here are a few tips.
First, don't eat to many fast food.
Instead, eat fast food you eat vegetables and fruits.
Second,you wash your body and face clearly.
This can cause stress, so try to reduce your stress levels.
If you have acne gets worse, you had better exersice every day.
You can get advice from your mother.
Follow these tips, and you will be no have acne!
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