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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 10. 28 조회 9845

2021-10-28 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
On October 2021, the school noticed me that the IT Director accessed the computers. The computers were forcibly taken from me, by him one year and four months ago. It said that if it finds anything against the policies, it would reprimand me. Anyone can change the date of a file’s creation date or a program’s installation date. We can easily find the ways to do so by googling.
Do you think the procedure that the school has taken is appropriate?

The IT Department asks an employee to sign on the ‘Technology Resource Use Agreement’ form when it gives a computer to the employee.
튜터 교정 답변

On October 2021, the school noticed me that the IT Director accessed the computers. The computers were forcibly taken from me, by him one year and four months ago. It said that if it finds anything against the policies, it would reprimand me. Anyone can change the date of a file’s creation date or a program’s installation date. We can easily find the ways to do so by googling.
Do you think the procedure that the school has taken is appropriate?

The IT Department asks an employee to sign on the ‘Technology Resource Use Agreement’ form when it gives a computer to the employee.**

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