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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 11. 02 조회 9488

2021-11-02 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Before the Principal added the above article, I called a JDC auditor and told him that the Principle would abuse the article if it was added, explaining other cases that the Principal had abused her authority. After hearing from me, the auditor investigated why the Principal wanted to revise the policy. Last week, the auditor called me and said that he was sure that the Principal would abuse the article. However, he couldn't or maybe didn't stop the Principal from revising the policy.
튜터 교정 답변

Before the Principal added the above article, I called a JDC auditor and told him that the Principle would abuse the article if it was added, explaining other cases that the Principal had abused her authority. After hearing from me, the auditor investigated why the Principal wanted to revise the policy. Last week, the auditor called me and said that he was sure that the Principal would abuse the article. However, he couldn't or maybe didn't stop the Principal from revising the policy.**

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