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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 11. 09 조회 9715

2021-11-09

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Part of her gums got weak.
Some of her gums got weak.

In daily life, I need the internet/internet.

In your brain, once blood/the blood leaks, it remains there.

She hates you more than she hates your coworker.
She hates you more than your coworker.
She hates you more.
튜터 교정 답변

Part of her gums got weak.
Some of her gums got weak.

In daily life, I need the internet/internet.

In your brain, once blood/the blood leaks, it remains there.

She hates you more than she hates your coworker.
She hates you more than your coworker.  **
She hates you more.

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