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Could you let me know which sentence is better?

작성자: bbalee12 담당 튜터: Jem2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
- It's the high season to eat seafood.
- This time is good to eat seafood in season.
튜터 교정 답변

- It's the high time of the season to eat seafood.
- This Now is the right time is good to eat seafood in season.

 

After making some changes, both sentences are good to use.

교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!