my introduction
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I run a business with 20 employees at a company in Gimhae. The main items handled are products for hair designers and dog owners. For example, scissors, clipper, water purifier, straightener, etc.
I have two children, 18 years old son and 11 years old daugher.
I run my business with my husband together.
I have two children, 18 years old son and 11 years old daugher.
I run my business with my husband together.
튜터 교정 답변
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