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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 11. 24 조회 10106

MeJa's restaurant.

작성자: bomilee 담당 튜터: Trixie
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I ate at MeJa's restaurant with my parents last week.
We ordered rice noodles, fried rice, 분짜.
Both the rice noodle and the fried rice was savory.
The service was very good.
I thought the waiter was kind, and waiter made us feel thanks for him.
Fortunately, the restaurant was very good.
The music was very good.
All in all, MeJa's restaurant is a wonderful place to eat.
I recommend the rice noodles!
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I ate at MeJa's restaurant with my parents last week.
We ordered rice noodles and fried rice, 분짜.
Both rice noodle and  fried rice were savory.
The service was very good.
I thought the waiter was kind, and the waiter made us feel thankful for his service.
Fortunately, the restaurant was very good.
The music was very good.
All in all, MeJa's restaurant is a wonderful place to eat.
I recommend the rice noodles!

 

 

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