Volunteering at the nursing house
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Last year, i decided to do some volunteer work.
First, i thought about places to volunteer at.
I chose the Nursing house litter near my house.
There are many elder people there.
They can't go outside or see their families often.
That made me feel sad.
Every Sunday, i went to the Nursing house at 2:00 P.M.
I played games with the residents and talk with me.
I went home at 5:00 P.M.
I always felt much happier after spending time with them.
Although i'm a teenager, i'm glad that i can help the residents.
I am going to volunteer there again this year
First, i thought about places to volunteer at.
I chose the Nursing house litter near my house.
There are many elder people there.
They can't go outside or see their families often.
That made me feel sad.
Every Sunday, i went to the Nursing house at 2:00 P.M.
I played games with the residents and talk with me.
I went home at 5:00 P.M.
I always felt much happier after spending time with them.
Although i'm a teenager, i'm glad that i can help the residents.
I am going to volunteer there again this year
튜터 교정 답변
Last year, i decided to do some volunteer work.
First, i thought about places to volunteer at.
I chose the Nursing house litter near my house.
There are many elder people there.
They can't go outside or see their families often.
That made me feel sad.
Every Sunday, i went to the Nursing house at 2:00 P.M.
I played games with the residents and talk with me.
I went home at 5:00 P.M.
I always felt much happier after spending time with them.
Although i'm a teenager, i'm glad that i can help the residents.
I am going to volunteer there again this year
this is great 
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