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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 12. 04 조회 9987

A Book Report: Matilda

작성자: bomilee 담당 튜터: Trixie
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My favorite book is Matilda.
It is about a special girl named Matilda.
Roald Dahi wrote this story in 1988.
In the story, Matilda was so cleaver.
So she wants to learn.
But her perents can't go to school.
However her father plans bad trick and she can goes to very bad school.
But be different from her father mind, she get hight grade in school.
And her teacher named Miss Honey notice she is very cleaver.
And she also find her parents indifference for her.
In the end, she goes to live with Miss Honey.
Moreovor, the story was very fun to read.
I think everyone should read this book!
튜터 교정 답변

My favorite book is Matilda.
It is about a special girl named Matilda.
Roald Dahi wrote this story in 1988.
In the story, Matilda was so cleaver.
So she wants to learn.
But her perents can't go to school.
However her father plans a bad trick and she can go  to a  very bad school.
But it's different from his  father's mind, she got hight grades in school.
And her teacher named Miss Honey noticed that she is very cleaver.
And she also find her parents indifference for her.
In the end, she live with Miss Honey.
Moreovor, the story was very fun to read.
I think everyone should read this book!

 

=== nice story , I like it too=====

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