Watching musicals
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Although I watched musicals just several times, I like to watch musicals. The last musical I watched was Momma mia. It is one of the famous musicals worldwide. I watched it when I was travelling in London. The travel was my second going abroad. I wanted to watch a musical. Because London is so famous for musical. London is the home of musical. I hoped to feel musical reality despite of English musical, not Korean. I hesitated about choosing a musical that I would watch. I wanted all, but I didn’t have enough money and time. The options were Momma mia, Lion king and so on. Finally I chose Momma mia. I’m sure the song is included as the top 10 song that all people like. The story is that a lady tried to find her father that go to her wedding. Especially, I was excited when I heard the song Dancing Queen. The actors sang again for encore. All audience screamed and react. The musical is memorable because it was the first that I watched abroad. I can’t forget the impression.
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