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공개 첨삭 완료 2022. 04. 11 조회 9305

First day of class

작성자: jylee19 담당 튜터: mandela2usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Today was my first day of discussion course. I was looking forward to taking this class as I've strongly felt a need to improve my English speaking proficiency whenever talking to my foreign counterparts in the Embassies in Seoul. I used to feel much more comfortable communicating with them in email and whenever I got a call from them or got to meet them in person, I easily got nervous and became a fool. Through this valuable opportunity, with Mandela, I will try to attain my personal goal to make myself become comfortable with speaking and dicussing things in English clearly without mistakes.
튜터 교정 답변

Today was my first day of English conversation course. I've been looking forward to taking this class, I've strongly felt a need to improve my English speaking proficiency whenever talking to my foreign counterparts in the Embassies in Seoul. I feel much more comfortable communicating with them in email and whenever I'd get a call from them or meet them in person, I easily get nervous and become a fool. Through this valuable opportunity, with Mandela, I will try to attain my personal goal of being more comfortable speaking and dicussing things in English.

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