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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 07. 04 조회 13293

Today's Schedule

작성자: 120295 담당 튜터: Kat
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello~
Good afternoon.
Did you happend to have enjoyable lunch?
I came to my office after having lunch.
and I walked around the small lake being near by my office. The name is "Sukchon lake"

Anyway.
I'm so sorry about rescheduling today's class from 17:00 to 16:300.
Because I have a another English class which start at 17:00.
This class will be finished at next WED.
Maybe I'll reschedule until that time.

Thank you.
See you soon~
튜터 교정 답변

Hello! Good afternoon. - Good Sentence

Did you happend to have enjoyable lunch? - Did you happened to have an enjoyable lunch?

I came to my office after having lunch. and I walked around the small lake being near by my office. - I came went back to my office after having lunch and I walked around the small lake being near by my office.

The name is "Sukchon lake". - Good Sentence

Anyway, I'm so sorry about rescheduling today's class from 17:00 to 16:300. - Anyway. I'm so sorry about rescheduling today's class from 17:00 to 16:300.

Because I have a another English class which start at 17:00. This class will be finished at next WED. Maybe I'll reschedule until that time. - Because I have a another English class which starts at 17:00.

This class will be finished at next WED. Maybe I'll reschedule until that time. - This class will be finished at this next WED. Maybe I'll reschedule my classes until that time.

Thank you. See you soon~

Hi Jack!

Thank you for sending me a letter for the second time and yes, I had a very good lunch. :) No problem with that Jack, I totally understand. Finally, we'll be able to talk later. :)

Teacher Kat

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